“...louder!louder!louder!louder!”
I take away his body and chainsaw and I use the chainsaw to cut the 3 police to 9 block.
And take they body to thrown into the fire-mountain.And no one knows police whereabout.
After a month, I saw my host working to my castle in evening. I suspected my fevered. But I am not mistaken, blood is all of in his body. I'm very afraid, I locked my steel door, and he is getting closer from the castle. I start to shout:''Please don't! Please don't!''
But as the moment he touched steel door, he died. My whole body are cold sweat. ''Oh! God! I almost died" I said.
In order to thank god, I go to the court and surrender.
After I was released from prison, in order to atone, I go to be a Christian......
THE END
George Lo's ESLII English Journal
Saturday, May 25, 2013
Sunday, May 19, 2013
Unreliable Narrator
I think in a story not have a good narrator, audiance will not be infection and they don't think this story deserve to see.Write a narrator is very difficult, because in narrator can't performance more than important drama, and must make audiance exciting.
A unreliable narrator could be make audiance boring and tidious. And audiance won't trust this narrator, or don't want to see this story.But we can trust 80% story narrator, so we just see this story good or bad, don't worried about others things.
A unreliable narrator could be make audiance boring and tidious. And audiance won't trust this narrator, or don't want to see this story.But we can trust 80% story narrator, so we just see this story good or bad, don't worried about others things.
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